One blow
frees the seeds
from its stem
and
coupled with a wish
it travels
down
the
water
and
washed up
along the riverside.
Picked up by
a wide-eyed child
with dirt-filled fingernails
as she goes to the water
to wash her hands.
She notices flower seeds
without a stem
wondering
where its beauty has gone
I enjoyed this
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Thank you so much that really means a lot!(:
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I actually enjoy quite a bit of your blog. You got some mad skills :) one of my fav blogs to read. Keep it up. If not for your own enjoyment but for the rest of us poor shmucks who read what is created in your head with interest.
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Thank you (again) lol I love your writing as well it’s really, really awesome. I’m one of your biggest fans so I may need your autograph soon! Oh yes, I always try to write for all of those “shmucks” out there :P
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Haha thanks! :)
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Good imagery. Plus, I’ve always had a mild obsession with dandelions! Very nice!
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Why thank you very much. They are one of the most underrated flowers out there lol Poor dudes don’t get enough attention!
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i really like this~
:)
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Thank you times a billion-million that is amazing!
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:D
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Another great one! I love how innocent you made the girl.
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Thank you very madam I really put the focus on her too. Really, really cool that you liked it.
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More more more! I know finals are basically over so now you have lots of time haha :)
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Presh! :)
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Why thank you very much Ms. :P
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You are very welcome Mr. :3
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