A tear from the sky onto the clouds
not for the world,
only for you.
A dance by the moon under the stars
not for the world,
only for you.
A reflection of sun in a sea full of darkness
not for the world,
only for you.
A light up above to help guide the way home
not for the world,
only for you.
A place in the world and meaning to live
not for the world,
only for me.
Those are the words of pure poetry~love!
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Thanks so much! Glad you like it!
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This is beautiful. What fantastic form, and I love the use of color to accent the you/me switch. :D
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I also want to thank you for the pleasant comment on one of my poems. Made my day ^_^
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Thank you very much. A little color, gave the poem some more flare and style ;P lol
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I agree!!!! :D
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Simplicity that touches the heart. Nice! Thanks for visiting my blog and liking my post! God bless you!
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No problem! I glad you liked it!
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you very much!
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A wonderful poem!
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Why thank you very much!
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The line “Areflection of sun in a sea full of darkness” is absolutely exquisite … beautiful poem.
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I would have never thought that someone would think of my poem as exquisite. That is pretty awesome! lol
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Can’t sleep! Ironic? ;) I was writing some notes when I came across this gem again tonight. Reminds me of a romance in the sky. Pure and untouchable. Thanks for the read!
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I’m not much of a sleeper /: lol Why thank you very much again!
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Simple and beautiful, thanks for sharing :)
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You are so very welcome & thank you as well!(:
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SWEET AND LOVELY.
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Thank you & thank you >.< lol
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Nice, Vinny! I really like the hi-lites. Sleep less,,write more. ;D
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Thank you! But, you want me to never sleep and be unhealthy. Thanks for the amazing advice, gosh o.O lol
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Vampires don’t need sleep, do they?!?
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I don’t know I really don’t remember my vampire-states :P lol
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! This little poem just came to me out of no where during one of my sleepless nights lol
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Sleepless nights are usually where the best inspiration comes from :) many nights I’ve stayed up because my mind was racing with ideas, that just had to be put on paper! The joys of being an artist :) love this poem, by the way!
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Why thank you very much. It’s not good not to sleep, but it’s the time your able to think and write some stuff :O
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True true, but every artist has those nights.. I’ve found that’s when most of my best ideas come :)
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Well I guess we are both awesome night people :P
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I guess..
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I guess, that is no type of attitude to have!
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Sorry, having a bit of a rough night.. But no worries, I’ll be alright.. Soon
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We’ll I’m sorry to hear to. All will be okay, don’t worry :P
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I’m sure, just taking time…
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Love the you/me switch in this one, uncomplicated pure, lovely; thanks for posting.
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