Hit the Note


Like a treble to the bass
or a clef to a staff
high-hats led the way
and turned his lyrics into rap.

A tap of his foot
pulsed a rhythm in the sky
and a whistle from his lips
made clouds like an band passing by.

Repeated again
and again
melodies held his emotions inside.
The snare of the drums
Beat too loud
for them to hide

16 thoughts on “Hit the Note

  1. That is an awesome poem! I am at a standstill for the moment with my own writing, so it’s awesome to read other’s.


    1. I’m glad you liked it! Well, you should just write down random things that come to mind and try to make a crazy writing piece of it. Totally bad advice I know o.O


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