She fell in love with my words.
I couldn’t compete.
My stories, poetic flow,
and ability to ignite emotion in others
held her a captive to my craft.
My words are my catalyst;
the perfect muse to manipulate her mind,
make her fall in love, with me;
if she only knew of my intentions.
The way I can press ink to paper
made me worth something.
In her world,
she saw my beautiful
letters in-coherence,
stories of love,
and fictional tales
of our future beyond the page
before she spoke real words to me.
Poetry can help land a dream girl, a beautiful one too;
I’m different; most guys don’t write.
And she’ll adore me for my talent,
until she realizes, my ink speaks of non-fiction,
and I’m more than an emotion-soaked white blue-lined page
on the inside.
So beautiful!
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Thank you very much!
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I love the sounds of this poem. Really fabulous use of words. Especially the “i” sounds throughout in words like buried, risqué, etc… Great piece. 💕
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Wow, thank you. I never really looked at it like that before. Awesome observation there!
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Reblogged this on GUM | Growing Up Millennial.
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WOW! <3
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Great opening, friend. :)
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Subtle yet bold. Lovely way of stringing the words in a poem :)
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Perfection 😉
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Nothing is “perfect”… not possible! But, I’ll take your amazing compliment and run 😋
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Ha ha good to hear
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THIS is my favorite so far… The first two lines alone are powerful enough to be a poem in themselves. (Never forget, you will always be worth something, even if you weren’t amazing at poetry). <3
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You are officially one of the nicest people ever, Jess. I love your page over there, too. Thank you (:
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I adore this! It’s so true and beautifully written too :)
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Love this 😊 Written beautifully
We are our emotions
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Beautiful!!! The wording and expression is phenomenal! Well done!
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Wow, thank you, Morgan. Your comment means so much 😌
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You’re right. Many forget reflect and recognise their emotions, desires and talent.
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Thank you for the comment. I love your comments because I always envy your writing and opinion. Thank you again, Becca!
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Don’t be so silly, you’re so modest! X
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BEAUTIFUL, the words, incredible, the being. :)
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You’re always so nice… too nice. Thank you ☺️
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You’re welcome, my friend. Words are one thing, a soul quite another, and the latter deserves to be recognized and appreciated, as well as the words. :)
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Wow, that’s an amazing (poetic, too) comment
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Huge grin
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