Never would I dumb down my words,
take off their clothing,
add double-layered context, hidden messages,
and poetic flow on top of their naked beauty.
Love, flowers and smiles
are fiction, readers enjoy them.
Blood, pain and desire
is non-fiction, readers shy away.
So go ahead, criticize me
for my pure emotions and opinions;
honestly, I don’t mind.
I write reckless.
I edit nothing.
I am uncensored, raw, me
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“I write reckless”, best line EVER! This is perfect. Do not ever let the world change the way you approach your art, you already do it perfectly.
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Wow, you’re way too sweet. Thank you again, April. I always appreciate your expert feedback (:
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You are very welcome. Keep them coming, I want to read more.
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And I’m glad you write this way! Love it! <3
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Of course, no need to write something that doesn’t reflect me. Thanks (:
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This feels so powerful. “I write reckless” I love it.
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The best way to be, really, Vinny!
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Thank you good sir, I totally agree with you!
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Hear, hear :)
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I really like this. It’s real
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Liked by a crazy talented writer like you? I’m truly flattered.
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I don’t know about the talented part, but I am crazy. Ha. You’re too kind. Thank you. I really do enjoy your poetry.
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Well you are super talented then, lol. Thank you so much, it really means a lot
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Thank you and you’re welcome xx
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I feel exactly the way you do . I write with pure and raw emotion, it pours from my heart and spills into ink. Great minds think alike and I love your ink
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Perfectly said, let it all pour out. If the reader likes it, great. If they disagree then who cares!
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Exactly! I say I write for me … And if someone else gets something out of it, then it’s just a bonus 💕
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