wrapping in and out
of fingers, held tightly by hand.
The same hand
held by past lovers
and all the others.
Each breeze, current, flow by the ocean side
point a new direction, new journey to go.
A kite inevitably follows.
A kite is paper-thin.
A kite isn’t meant to last.
As a breeze turns to storm,
the kite slips from hand,
out to the ocean
into the hand of another.
Another lover,
another new held hand,
an old kite
“The same hand
held by past lovers
and all the others.”
raw, true emotion – difficult to sum up in only a few lines but you sure dang did it
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That was my favorite part of the poem, too. Thank you so so much (:
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Simply beautiful
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Nicely done!
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Thank you very much! You’re an awesome writer yourself
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Thank you, Sir.
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Love the last stanza.
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