Drip on me your purity,
your cleanliness, and wash away
the sins, the ones I lock inside.
Take out my umbrella,
hide me under a rain coat,
and make me shutter,
drop no tear, when I cry.
No one likes being wet
when others are dry, and
no one likes dirty raindrops
when there’s nothing left to hide
vinnylanni 
Vinny, this poem is amazing. I love this. You are so talented, it is border line insane. “no one likes dirty raindrops/when there’s nothing left to hide” this line is so pure and real and also my favorite line I have read in a long time.
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You’re too sweet, thanks, Dev. It’s weird, some things I write I don’t like and others do and visa-versa; this one I was kind of that for me; I’m glad you liked it though! Hope all is well over there. I saw you started on some book stuff, so cool!
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Ha well it is as good as it can be right now. I wish the stuff I liked came out as well as yours does! It is really amazing! :) How are things going for you? Thanks, I am trying something new for once, breaking out of my shell.
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Thank you and you’re really talented yourself over there, don’t sell yourself short (: Can’t wait to see more of your story, it’s so good and interesting in just a paragraph or two.
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Well thank you! :) I hope so. I stayed up until like 4 a.m trying to make it perfect haha
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You’re welcome (: & 4AM? Wow. That is dedication right there, more than I have lol It will turn out awesome, I’m sure of it
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Yeah, I know. 3 a.m. to about 6 a.m. is my prime time for writing. It is like during those precious hours my creativity took steroids haha
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Do you sleep? Geez. You’re a crazy person over there, but I do admire the dedication. Make sure you sleep or I’m going to yell at you! lol
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Sometimes…I don’t know I am more of a night person rather than a day person. I think it is because of the silence and calm that sets in. Don’t yell at me, that’s not very nice lol
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Nooo I won’t. You’re way too sweet to yell at. And, I agree the night is pretty calming 😌 I miss chatting with you, we should stay in touch more!
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awww thank you! You’re pretty sweet too! I know, I do too! We need to fix this chatting problem ;)
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Why thank you too, and I would agree! (:
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So how do we fix such issues? haha
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I’d have to message you some time so we can chat more!
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you should :)
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I really like this one. The thoughts and feelings it emotes are so honest. Well done!
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You’re too nice, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Big fan of your writing too, you are really talented
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I am flattered. Thank you.
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Beautiful. Thought inducing soul searching.
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Thank you so much, there is some deep meaning behind this one, glad you liked it!
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I most certainly can feel it. There are few like minded who perk up with recognition.
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You’re too nice, thank you for the comment. You’re a really talented writer too, I love your rawness and reality to your writing, so good.
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Thank you. I’ve currently have almost 200 written but I was very private with them. My best friend convinced me to start sharing. Glad that I did.
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Thank you for visiting my page!! – exploring yours has been quite the delight~
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Beautiful..
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Thank you so, so much!
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So beautifully written, Vinny!
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Beautiful as always. :)
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You are so nice like always. Thank you (:
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Love.
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If you like one of my poems then I know it must be sort-of-good. Yes! Thank you lol (:
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Lol you know they’re good! I love them all, this one is fantastic.
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Well thank you very, very much!
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This is beautiful.
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You’re amazing. Thank you (:
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Anytime~ I will be a advent reader to your blog.
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Lovely
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I’m glad you like it. I liked how this one turned out, glad you agree!
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It turned out beautifully, and I’m a poetry snob ;)
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Us poetry snobs are an elite group lol & thank you, you’re so nice ^^
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