What if no one was there
and it was only
you and I, but neither of us existed.
I could write this poem
page after page,
forever and ever,
but it wouldn’t matter
because it was all a dream
or better yet, a mirage.
What if what I’m saying makes no sense.
What if I’m crazy?
What if I’m not?
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Reblogged this on OrgasmicAngel's Mind and commented:
What a thought.
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The perfect nihilist!
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It’s a a very interesting though to say the least!
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Love this! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff ☺
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Thanks! There should be a bunch more on the way ^^
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Interesting train of thought… Really like it! ^^
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Why thank you very much, that’s awesome that you liked it
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The middle verse is what got me, gorgeous.
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Wow, thank you. Thanks for the inspirational comment, really means a lot!
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heh, no worries. :)
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I mean you don’t spell like a 5 year old so I say win!
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Lol you really had to go there, thanks a lot! :P
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I like the feeling in this. But maybe you could refine it a bit more? Just a thought!
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I agree with you, I like the emotion, but the words aren’t expressing it too well. Hmm, it might change one day soon after I read it over a few times lol
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That’s honest, I respect that. I know sometimes I get frustrated when a piece of mine just doesn’t quite hit the mark.
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Adore Adore
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Really? I don’t know, I don’t like it that much! I’m being honest lol
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Perhaps I am simply overlooking it, but where is your previous post button or arrow? I’d like to catch up on your posts. Beautiful piece I might add.
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Why thank you! It should be all the way at the bottom if you keep scrolling down, somewhere lol
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