Etch out your idea
with a stencil and
begin with soft stroke of blue,
just inside the lines.
Then maybe a metaphor
and a simile,
make it a satire
only you could understand
keep them guessing,
wanting more.
Do it in first-person
write what you see
make it abstract,
but true to you
blend, create and
bring it to life.
Perhaps some personification,
create fingers, hands
a beating heart.
Add a coat on top,
a semi-gloss finish
dip back into water,
repeat
and do it again
You are a wonderful writer. I always enjoy reading lines that fall off into the next, something you capture quite brilliantly.
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Wow thank you so, so, so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it, really means a lot
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Of course. Have you written anything lately?
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I have a few things, but I have not posted them on here. They should be coming soon, hopefully lol
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Well Vinny I needed to read the poem again and again and guess what…. the poem became alive with those cleverly constructed words of yours! Its definitely a deserved prize winner! Awesome poetry – well done – repeat -do it again! :-)
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Thank you so much and I loved your quirky ending to your comment lol I will have to repeat and try to do it again!
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Love the imagery of black and white, then movement into color. Made me realize that I often take seeing color for granted–whether in the world or in writing like your poem. Tomorrow I will appreciate and notice all of the color in my life! Thanks!
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No problem, that’s awesome that my poem pointed that stuff out for you. Thank you for the awesome response.
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Poetry is like that. Can mean different things to different people even if it’s the same poem. Thanks!
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Look at you yet again doing another amazing poem :)
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Well someone needs to stop being so nice!(:
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Then stop being so good haha I have some poems to send you to pass by you
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Awesome! I look forward to reading them! I’m sure they will be really good.
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Love this! =)
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That’s so awesome to hear. Really cool that you like it!
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I learned from Hollywood always leave your reader in suspense and make them buy the sequel or prequel lol jk But another thank you Ms :P
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Those final 3 lines! damn (:
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