Like a treble to the bass
or a clef to a staff
high-hats led the way
and turned his lyrics into rap.
A tap of his foot
pulsed a rhythm in the sky
and a whistle from his lips
made clouds like an band passing by.
Repeated again
and again
melodies held his emotions inside.
The snare of the drums
Beat too loud
for them to hide
vinnylanni 
So much energy moving through this lyric!
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I was trying to go for a music-type feel to it. Something cool and flow-y. This one was pretty fun to write! :P
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I loved it! The words have their own melody. It all fits perfectly together! =)
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Thanks! That’s what I kind of tried to do :P lol
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Loved this! :)
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Thank you, thank you, you are far too kind!
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This is great!! Are you a musician too? I am, which is why I ask, and why this really speaks to me. Love it :-)
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No, not even close! I love to listen to music if that counts for anything >.< lol
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Of course it counts!! Haha, if the music is in your heart then you can be an honorary musician ;D
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I like that response, sounds like a famous quote or something :P lol
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Wish it was; I just made it up. Haha, thanks though! :-)
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I have not read all of your work here but this so far is my fav! Nicely done!
BTW…thanks for stopping by my site and liking my haiku “Time.”
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Glad you like my stuff & thanks, no problem!
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That is an awesome poem! I am at a standstill for the moment with my own writing, so it’s awesome to read other’s.
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I’m glad you liked it! Well, you should just write down random things that come to mind and try to make a crazy writing piece of it. Totally bad advice I know o.O
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It could be bad, but it’s not a bad idea.
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