Hair bright, blonde and curled
fall in her face;
once dark, brown and straight,
gone without a trace.
She stares at me,
I fear to look back;
a heart full of hope has now turned to black.
Maybe she’s lost,
forced to wander stray,
a hope and a turn, it all goes away
Great poem!
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I agree. A powerful message written beautifully in both poems.
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Thank you so, so much. Glad you liked it!
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Indeed matches up to your latest poem really well! Love both poems :)
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You’re so nice, always ^^
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I get this sense of inner struggle when I read this… Pretty good.
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Well I guess I did a decent job because that was the message I was trying to get across, yes! lol
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Lovely. Keep writing. You have a unique perspective.
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Thank you so much it really means a lot!
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Really wonderful poem. You have a great talent. :)
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Thank you, thank you, you are far too kind *takes a bow
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It ’tis a Work of Art, man!
It flows well.
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Art! oh wow maybe I should start painting too, but I appreciate the compliment! lol
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If you want to start painting, I say… Give it a Shot!
I posted this to my New Page.
https://www.facebook.com/GuardiansPageOfPoetry
I will take it down if you want me to.
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No! That is really awesome. It is pretty darn cool so you should totally keep it up lol
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Very nice. Keep writing poetry for sure.
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Thank you! Really means a lot!
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Awesome poem! Keep writing you clearly have a gift :)
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Now I will totally keep on writing! lol
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A VERY NICE PIECE.
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Noooo your totally lying! lol jk
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Very good! Keep it up :)
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Thank you so much! I guess I’m a poet and I don’t even know it :D
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Deep and loveable! :0)
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Really? :O Thanks so much!
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