After the Storm
December 27, 2012
Wait for it, wait for it… another poem. Don’t get too excited, I know everyone loves my poems. Try and contain yourself for this one. Cue the poetry!
Neither a word nor whisper in the air
A man staggers down the street
Caressing a photograph in his hand
Wind gusts swirl through the tortured town
Toward a new destination
Tall, marvelous buildings now
Undressed with their gowns lying on the floor
Birds creep into cracks
Have no songs left to sing
To get scraps of old remains for their nest
Tears trickle down the man’s face as
His lips draw a blank
Memories flash in his head
The sun a familiar visitor
Rises to watch and spread love to the survivors
But can’t hide the hurt
Onwards to the next town
The wind lifts picks up the photograph
For a roller coaster ride
Circles around and places back on the ground
A school of fish once splashed in the sea
Now stuck to the sand
The man says a final goodbye
As the picture swirls toward the sky
You are probably wondering where is the pretty picture that goes with the poem. Well, I forgot to put one and was going to add one, but then I realized words without a picture really makes you think and paint a picture for yourself!
January 6, 2013 at 8:57 pm
I didn’t even know you had posted a new poem. My reader on WordPress clearly is broken. What a beautiful poem, even without the photo.
January 6, 2013 at 9:00 pm
Really? Darn. Maybe WordPress hates more or something lol I was going to add a picture, but I was like you know what, I want the words to paint the picture for me and thank you!
January 6, 2013 at 9:20 pm
You’re welcome! Yeah, if my phone is right, you posted the poem December 27. I just got the notification forty-five minutes ago.
January 6, 2013 at 9:26 pm
Oh well, It’s official they hate my blog :P lol
January 10, 2013 at 11:38 am
Oh that’s nice I did have a beautiful picture in my mind!!! Espically the swirling wind!
January 10, 2013 at 12:12 pm
That’s good! If I could make the reader develop some imagery then I am doing my job, yes! :D lol
January 10, 2013 at 1:09 pm
Hi Vinny
Thanks for swinging by my blog & letting me know you did :)) Gives me an extra push to get myself motivated to actually post something a bit more constructive soon LOL! HTK
January 10, 2013 at 1:18 pm
No problem! Thanks for commenting back on mine!
February 19, 2013 at 6:22 am
Thank-you for visiting and commenting on my poem. It provided a path here for which I’m grateful. Love your work. This poem gave me a tremendous feeling of sadness, but the hope glimmered through and made me smile. Very, very nice.
February 19, 2013 at 10:54 am
You are welcome & thanks for your insight. I liked writing this poem, trying to balance sadness, but still being hopeful
May 3, 2013 at 12:38 am
*Sniffle*
Dear gods, that’s beautiful. You have a magnificent talent for creating a beautiful scene in the mind’s eye.
May 3, 2013 at 6:10 pm
*Hands you a tissue >.< I love writing those emotion provoking types of poems!
May 5, 2013 at 10:45 pm
Well, aren’t you sweet. ^_^
I do, too. And I love reading them! Great job. :)
May 6, 2013 at 2:24 pm
Thanks! I wish you were my one of my professors I would totally get an A+ then :P
May 6, 2013 at 3:13 pm
I’d give you an A+ any day ^_^